So I watched Sherlock and loved it :) Although the second one didn't hold my interest as much as the rest....

It has in fact encouraged me to write the most porn-y, in fact the only vaguely porny thing I have ever written!

Title:  Distraction
Fandom: Sherlock
Rating: R/NC17
Pairing: Sherlock/John (unrequited?), Sherlock/HisHand
Word Count: 533
Summary: Sherlock's a little distracted, logically he needs to get it out of his system
Archived at AO3
 
   

The problem.  The problem was... difficult to focus on.  Which in itself was the bigger problem really.  He couldn't shake the feeling he was missing things, important clues and signs and-

And he was an asset, he was.  But he was also a distraction.  How could Sherlock concentrate on a case when the corner of his eye kept catching on John's mouth or his hands or-  The corner of his eye was for important things damn it; for details.  Details of the case, not of John Watson.

He should be listening for clues not for compliments.  He should be feeling smug about solving cases, not because John had once again proclaimed him amazing.

He certainly shouldn't be lying on the couch feeling.... something because John was at Sarah's again.  Because the other morning when he returned from Sarah's he didn't have that crick in his neck that he had had before.

Definitely shouldn't be contemplating what John was doing right now, if Sarah had noticed his hands or his mouth or if John called her amazing-

He glanced down at his hand where it lay on his stomach, fingers twitching on his waistband.  It seemed all this distraction had led to another, more physical, distraction.  He stilled their restless movement, resisted any further movements that his body seemed to be insisting on. 

Why?  Not why did his hand resume its restless motion seconds later, he knew full well why.  But why resist it?  Perhaps giving in would prevent further distraction.  Logical conclusion and all that, he thought as he slid his hand under the waistband.  Groaned as flesh met flesh and pushed the back of his head into the arm of the sofa, eyes squeezed shut.

A small moment of distraction, perhaps it would allow him to concentrate on things other than John's-

he gasped on the first stroke-

hands-

he moved his hand faster, get it over and-

smile-mouth-lips-

"Sherlock?"

His eyes flew open just in time to see John stop in the open (bugger) doorway.  His mouth had fallen open in a rather distracting, "Oh."  No that really wasn't helping matters, was it?

Despite the urge to scramble together some sense of decency Sherlock didn't move an inch.  John gaped at him some more.  It seemed he wasn't going to move anytime soon, logically Sherlock would have to say or do something to make him move.  But what?

"It's rather difficult to imagine that you're sucking me off when you're hovering in the doorway like that."

...

That really should not have been it.

"Right," John responded shuffling backwards.  "Hang on, what?" he paused and glanced back at Sherlock, his eyes darting towards and then quickly away from where his hand was still hidden beneath his trousers.

Sherlock stared at him, unrepentant.  There was no use going back on it now.  John gaped for a moment more and then fled up the stairs.  Sherlock closed his eyes again and sighed.  The interruption had certainly not quelled his little distraction; in fact it had seemed to rather encourage it.

"Shit," he murmured, his hand gave one last squeeze and he came with a gasp.

This was definitely going to be a distraction.

  

x-posted to [livejournal.com profile] 221b_slash  and [livejournal.com profile] sherlockbbc  



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From: [identity profile] how-to-shine.livejournal.com


This is amazing...I'd love to see followup to it, how John reacts etc. So good :D

From: [identity profile] deepbluemermaid.livejournal.com


Ahh, I do like fics where arousal destroys Sherlock's brain-mouth filter - good stuff tends to come out! I'd love to see John's response to this unexpected honesty...

From: [identity profile] warriorbot.livejournal.com


For a PWP this has fantastic depths of characterisation! I really enjoyed this on a level beyond simply *unf*.

This line "It's rather difficult to imagine that you're sucking me off when you're hovering in the doorway like that."

is made of win!

Would you consider reposting to http://community.livejournal.com/221b_slash/ (the dedicated BBC'verse slash comm)

From: [identity profile] warriorbot.livejournal.com


(sorry - that sounded wrong - for /anything/ this had fantastic depths of characterisation but it's particularly thrilling to find it lavished on something this hot!)

From: [identity profile] littlehollyleaf.livejournal.com


!!!

You are 100 kinds of awesome. This was perfect :) Love the idea of Sherlock treating John and a 'problem' to solve or a 'distraction' to overcome, and then being incapable of either because there's more involved in his attraction than he realises. Great stuff :)
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From: [personal profile] glitterary


Haha! This was fantastic. I love the matter-of-factness of Sherlock's outburst. Would love to see a follow-up; please do!
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From: [personal profile] glitterary


Agreed, sometimes it's more fun when characters don't get what they want. For us. But still...!

From: [identity profile] seektheinfinite.livejournal.com


Was skimming my flist and saw your now in the Sherlock fandom! Yay! Everyone should be opened to the joys of Sherlock. The second one was a bit slower than the other two, but then it wasn't written by Gatiss or Moffatt so that probably explains it.

From: [identity profile] hobbylobby.livejournal.com


Love this so hard! I lean toward unrequited love from Sherlock's pov so this is just perfect.

From: [identity profile] asheneyed.livejournal.com


I agree with everything else said. Very enjoyable, love the tagline of course. Why do things that would normally put me off about men sound so AMAZING coming from Sherlock? Lol. He's a sociopath, but he's OUR sociopath, dammit!

Also, the imagery of John literally fleeing up the stair is hilarious. He's so silly.

Do this again. Very fun.

From: [identity profile] sallycandance.livejournal.com


Lovely! Now we definitely need a sequel, because from this moment on, all John can think about is Sherlock and that John wants it to be *his* hand that's stroking the detective... *veg*
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From: [identity profile] pinigir.livejournal.com


Loved this! Loved that Sherlock decided not to hide what he was doing.

From: [identity profile] xtinethepirate.livejournal.com


HEE! I love filterless Sherlock; his response was so very... Cumberbatch!Holmes. I could hear it in his low, look-are-you-deliberately-being-stupid? voice. Wonderful.
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