ext_106564 ([identity profile] mishka-jayne.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fathomlessspite 2007-09-11 02:35 am (UTC)

*squees with delight* Ohh, a new chapter, even if its only half one.

1 minor point - Waist is the spelling you are after. He was caught at the last second by Draco’s arm securely attaching itself round his waste.

I'm wanting to smack Ginny. - nice touch.
It had been short as Draco had said ....
A whole paragraph on the weather there compared to here.

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