ext_56189 ([identity profile] nomeci.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fathomlessspite 2008-07-25 09:46 pm (UTC)

I am continuing to adore this story!

I did see a few typos you may want to fix:

It was Boxing Fay evening (Boxing Day?)

Harry spent much of the time finishing up the his marking for the holidays, (the vs his)

I know what it is like barely having time to write... I am glad things will be a little easier for you for a while :)

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